Library Ghost Girl

First of all I would like to start with what an amazing composition you have drawn and great perspective!!! But since you will ask for a critique I will gladly give you some constructive criticism!

One rule in digital art = don't use 100% black for shadows and shading, why? would you ask. Well you cannot go any darker when it is already black! And when you look around almost nothing around you is completely 100% black! Try to use a slightly lighter tone, since the floor with the tiles almost completely disappear, which is a loss because you've spend time in them! The shading overal is too dark and it makes no sense for the spiderweb to be there and to be seen. The whole left side could be way brighter and that way the lovely girl you drew would stand out more + the amazing floor you drew! You hide away all kinds of great aspects you drew be shading too dark.

Secondly for shading, try to play more with colors, don't go to the grey / black side of the colorwheel but tend to play a bit more with warm and cool colors. Black tones make a drawing often look flat. Overal you could play more with lighting and shading!

Now on to the positive things! The perspective is amazing and original. I think it is a very hard perspective to do and you nailed it! Secondly the see through effect of the ghost girl is very nice! It is not too much and not too less,it's perfectly done! I also really love her expression and her eyes and the clothes look really nice.

Overal I think this is a lovely piece and it looks like it was a nice challenge! I hope you had a lot of fun while drawing this and I see some really nice techniques! I hope this critique will help you to experiment more and learn more in art! If you have any more questions, feel free to ask!

Great piece, great vision and very original, keep it up!